Maths statistics test

I think that I need to work on the mean the median and the range but I understand how to work out the range now.

Reading research assessment

Comment:

Feedback:you work good with a grop.

Feedfowd:you can work on talking clear to the ourdence.

Maia s grop member 

Art simple:

W.a.l.t mould and add detail.

I am proud of my chick because I put a lot of detail into it.

My tea set challenged me because all of the small parts.

I enjoyed the challenge of it and enjoyed using my creativity too.

I learned how to mold and make things stick with vinger. 

Next time I think I might try it at home.

Clay tea party 

Models

Reading air rifles research

secsess criteria

Comment:

Feedback:you work good with a grop.

Feedfowd:you can work on talking clear to the ourdence.

Maia s grop member 

Link to our pretension

 http://youtu.be/x8q-uskMjts

Finial writing product 23.3.14

                                                                     Falling 

 This is it, this is really it. I'm sitting in a really really small extremely tiny waiting room at the top of a 12m high abseiling tower waiting for Cameron to go down it! Come on, come on I think. Finally after an exscrutiating wait I hear a familiar voice. "Next" announced Kelly. I rapidly stumbled to my feet and I start my climb to the top of the mammoth ladder. I burst in to the fresh, free air at the top of the tower Aaaaaaaaaa, relief at last. I leaned over the side to look at the view... 

Woooow. What a spectacular view. 

 

"Great Isint it"  Exclaimed Kelly. 

 "Yes, definitly."  I gasped 

 "Are you scared of heights?"

 

"No" 

 "Good". 

 She told me how to work the belay device and asked me if I was ready to go. Definitely, I replied though unaware of the danger involved. I lent over the ege. THUMP THUMP THUMP a figure appeared from the little gap in the floor. It was Ants, the abseiling instructor. She waved her charcoal hand at me. Good bye. I lent back, Then it happened... 

 Wow! I said as I slipped like jelly down the side of the tower. Click, wizzzz, clunk. Click, wizzzz chattered the carobeners over and over agan like a stuck record. Wistfily the rope trailed through my vein streaked hand. It started to turn black. I started to enjoy my self. I briskly started to jump and hop as I descended down to the ground.

 I plonked down on the ground with a THUD. Well now I know why it takes sooooo long to get to the bottom. Well done shar whispered as she unclipped me from the jumble of belay and carobeners. Thanks a lot I said under my breath. I have to admit it I did do a great job didn't I. Weooooeeeeooooo screamed the siren. Feed time. all those biscuits and chocolate cake yummy!!! I defiantly deserve these treats after all I have absailed Down a 12m tower haven't I. I'm going to sleep like a log to night. 

                                                                 The end

 By Ben

Illustration by Ben 

  secsess criteria 

Camp booklet and air rifles score 21.3.14

I got in shoting 66/70

Writing 20.3.14

DRAFT 3

                                                             Falling 

(This is it, this is really it.  I'm sitting in a (really really small) (extremely tiny) wating room at the top of a 12m high abseiling tower waiting for Cameron to go down it! Come on, come on I think. Finally after an exscrutiating wait I hear a familiar voice.)

"Next" (said) announced Kelly. I (rapidly) (stumbled) scurried to my feet and I start my climb to the top of the mamith mammoth ladder. I burst in to the fresh, free air at the top of the tower. (Aaaaaaaaaa, relief at last. I leaned over the side to look at the view... Woooow. What a spectacular view.)

 

"Great is it?" Exclaimed Kelly.

"Yes, definitly." I gasped

 "Are you scared of heights?"

"No"

"Good".

She told me how to work the belay device and asked me if I was ready to go. Definitely, I replied though unaware of the danger involved. I lent over the ege. Thump thump thump a figure appeared from the little gap in the floor. (It was Ants, the abseiling instructor. She waved her charcoal hand at me. ) Good bye. I lent back, Then it happened...

 Wow!  I said as I slipped like jelly down the side of the tower. Click, wizzzz, clunk. Click, wizzzz (said) chattered the carobeners over and over agan like a stuck record. Wistfily the rope (traieled) trailed through my vain streaked hand. It started to turn black. I started to enjoy my self. I briskly started to jump and hop as I descended down to the ground.

(I plonked down on the ground with thud. Well now I no why it takes sooooo longto get to the bottom.) Well done shar wisped (as she unkliped me from the jumble of belay and carobeners.) Thank a lot I under my breath. I do edmit it I did do a great job didn't I. Weooooeeeeooooo screamed the sire. (Feed time. all those biscuits and chocolate cake yummy!!! I defiantly dezorve these treats after all I have absailed Down a 12m tower haven't I. I'm going to sleep like a log to night.)

                                                                The end  

By Ben 

Buddy feedback nice sounds affects.

Byddy feedfowd I think you do not need eny more improvement

Josh