Thursday, 7 August 2014

Writing Hiwi the Kiwi




Writing

 Hiwi the Kiwi 

Hey you, yes you, listen up. You and most people know how to fish but do you know how to fish properly and safely? It is vital you listen up because this could keep you out of jail and keep fish and chips going!

So let's get the point about fishing, it is definitely a fun and exciting sport but why in the world would you put big fish back in the sea? This is where it gets interesting. Why is. Because big fish may have babies in their stomachs and if you eat the fish you will kill the babies and the next generation of fish. Remember to put the big fish back in the sea and then you can wait until they get even bigger then you can catch them for your tea.

So now that we have talked about fish getting bigger and reproducing now we are going to talk about water safety and how to use and activate locator beacons.

Hey! don't stop listening this this is only the third paragraph.  In your boat there should be a yellow milk bottle looking thing.  In case of emergency you open it up and inside there is three flares and one locator beacon that looks like a tube thing. Go to the fourth paragraph to learn how to use a flare or go to the fifth paragraph to learn how to activate the locator beacon.

How to work a flare:
First you get the flare out of the yellow milk bottle thing.  Then you hold it high above your head and pull hard on the bottom of it.  WARNING Do not look into the top of the flare!  

How to work the locator beacon:
This beacon is activated by salt water.  If your boat capsizes the beacon will automatically start to flash and send a signal to the coastguard to come and rescue you. 

Are you still listening? Don't forget I could still save your life! Hopefully this has taught you how to be safer around water and how to make sure future generations get to eat fish and chips.  If you didn't pay attention to anything have said remember this one thing - always wear a LIFE JACKET when you are out on the water.

By Ben 

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Ben! You have used questions and detail to make some great points about fishing for the future. Next time, do not include any new information in the conclusion. :)

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