Garfield - W.A.L.T write a character description.

Garfield writing description

Garfield is a tipickel fat cat how loves sticky lozanua!
He spends most of his time eating,
If he is not eating he will probly be in frunt of the TV,
Or be in the colder sack( were he lives) ecsploring.
He loves to go on edvenshis. His Onas name is Jon. Jon gets anoyd when Garfield eat all the lozanua that he Bort for himself.
Garfield also has a brother. his name is oudy. he is a dog!

Garfield didn't piticly like oudy, acshly he hates him.
Ever sins they Jon got oudy Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewored
With lozanua.

Edited version by Rosie - Ben can you please proof read and edit your writing, Thanks.

Garfield writing description

Garfield is a typical fat cat who loves sticky lasagne!
He spends most of his time eating and
if he is not eating he will probably be in front of the TV,
Or be in the culdesac (where he lives) exploring.
He loves to go on adventures. His Owners name is Jon. Jon gets annoyed when Garfield eats all the lasagne that he bought for himself.
Garfield also has a brother his name is Odie. He is a dog!

Garfield doesn't particularly like Odie, actually he hates him.
Ever since Jon got Odie, Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewarded
with lasagne.

Ben it's looking really good at the moment. I really like the way you have used different sentence openers and some complex words. Maybe next time you could add more detail about what Garfield looks like. Rosie