Sunday, 17 March 2013
Garfield - W.A.L.T write a character description.
Garfield writing description
Garfield is a tipickel fat cat how loves sticky lozanua!
He spends most of his time eating,
If he is not eating he will probly be in frunt of the TV,
Or be in the colder sack( were he lives) ecsploring.
He loves to go on edvenshis. His Onas name is Jon. Jon gets anoyd when Garfield eat all the lozanua that he Bort for himself.
Garfield also has a brother. his name is oudy. he is a dog!
Garfield didn't piticly like oudy, acshly he hates him.
Ever sins they Jon got oudy Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewored
With lozanua.
Edited version by Rosie - Ben can you please proof read and edit your writing, Thanks.
Garfield writing description
Garfield is a typical fat cat who loves sticky lasagne!
He spends most of his time eating and
if he is not eating he will probably be in front of the TV,
Or be in the culdesac (where he lives) exploring.
He loves to go on adventures. His Owners name is Jon. Jon gets annoyed when Garfield eats all the lasagne that he bought for himself.
Garfield also has a brother his name is Odie. He is a dog!
Garfield doesn't particularly like Odie, actually he hates him.
Ever since Jon got Odie, Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewarded
with lasagne.
Ben it's looking really good at the moment. I really like the way you have used different sentence openers and some complex words. Maybe next time you could add more detail about what Garfield looks like. Rosie
Garfield is a tipickel fat cat how loves sticky lozanua!
He spends most of his time eating,
If he is not eating he will probly be in frunt of the TV,
Or be in the colder sack( were he lives) ecsploring.
He loves to go on edvenshis. His Onas name is Jon. Jon gets anoyd when Garfield eat all the lozanua that he Bort for himself.
Garfield also has a brother. his name is oudy. he is a dog!
Garfield didn't piticly like oudy, acshly he hates him.
Ever sins they Jon got oudy Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewored
With lozanua.
Edited version by Rosie - Ben can you please proof read and edit your writing, Thanks.
Garfield writing description
Garfield is a typical fat cat who loves sticky lasagne!
He spends most of his time eating and
if he is not eating he will probably be in front of the TV,
Or be in the culdesac (where he lives) exploring.
He loves to go on adventures. His Owners name is Jon. Jon gets annoyed when Garfield eats all the lasagne that he bought for himself.
Garfield also has a brother his name is Odie. He is a dog!
Garfield doesn't particularly like Odie, actually he hates him.
Ever since Jon got Odie, Garfield has been left out but he still gets rewarded
with lasagne.
Ben it's looking really good at the moment. I really like the way you have used different sentence openers and some complex words. Maybe next time you could add more detail about what Garfield looks like. Rosie
Marae goals Monday 8 April 2013
1.I am gong to try not to talk when other people are talking.
2.I am going to try not to give up.
2.I am going to try not to give up.
Thursday, 7 March 2013
Week 5 reflection the leaning wheel friday 8th march 2013
Kowhaiwhai patten.
I felt... Nerves if I could get it Finished.
I tried... To get the reflection perfect.
I used... A trust koru and reflected it onto a blank piece of paper.
I wondered... If it would be dead straight or not
I learned... What reflection,rotation and translation mean.
I felt... Nerves if I could get it Finished.
I tried... To get the reflection perfect.
I used... A trust koru and reflected it onto a blank piece of paper.
I wondered... If it would be dead straight or not
I learned... What reflection,rotation and translation mean.
Writing caricter description
Cam,
He is a funny guy he always made me lafe.He is 9.
His hear was as wight as a sheeps cote and his eyes wore as blue as the sky.he had a mum angla and a dad brine and a sister gorga and a brother jack.he also has a dog jake and a cat millie.his fave food was __________.
His fave character is ________.His fave color is _______.
His fave author is ______ _______.
He loved to go hunting, camping and tramping. Me and him loved lego.he was always telling me about some crazy envenshin.
He always said "I don't no if I will be in the army,navy or air foris". And he still can't deside. He was a great friend.
By Ben I
DRAFT!!!!!!
Tekoteko art with room 9
How to make it?
W.a.l.t use symetry in art.
1. Fold a A4 peace of paper 1s landscape and then porttrate.
2.You dror a one half of a tekoteko how ever you like.
3. Then you pastel it with a darker colour like (green or dark blue)
4. Then you fold it porttrate
W.a.l.t use symetry in art.
1. Fold a A4 peace of paper 1s landscape and then porttrate.
2.You dror a one half of a tekoteko how ever you like.
3. Then you pastel it with a darker colour like (green or dark blue)
4. Then you fold it porttrate
Two stars and a wish. 15 march 2013 reflection week 6
Maths,kowhaiwhai art.
I think I did good at understanding what translation and rotation mean.
I know I did at not leaving any mosquito holes in my art and not giving up.
I wish I could get better using my time wisely because I had to rush at the end!
I think I did good at understanding what translation and rotation mean.
I know I did at not leaving any mosquito holes in my art and not giving up.
I wish I could get better using my time wisely because I had to rush at the end!
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